Ooh, really like the mood changing light in this transition shift, as well as the full view of the bedroom to give a sense of location. VERY NICE. The coloring and texture of this entire page works very well overall, gives atmosphere and warmth to the scene. A few spots worth mentioning for future improvement are anatomy and hair--be mindful of ear size in proportion to their skulls, like in the bottom panels (especially Edward in the bottom right) --and using strategic positioning will make drawing the unseen bridge of his nose unnecessary (and it already is unnecessary) Allow Edward's hair to conceal his features gracefully when it does.
Ooh, really like the mood changing light in this transition shift, as well as the full view of the bedroom to give a sense of location. VERY NICE. The coloring and texture of this entire page works very well overall, gives atmosphere and warmth to the scene. A few spots worth mentioning for future improvement are anatomy and hair--be mindful of ear size in proportion to their skulls, like in the bottom panels (especially Edward in the bottom right) --and using strategic positioning will make drawing the unseen bridge of his nose unnecessary (and it already is unnecessary) Allow Edward's hair to conceal his features gracefully when it does.
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